Autumn Leaves Comments

Excellent metaphors. A good 5*

Captures the eyes like the colors of fall! ! Beautiful! !

Superb metaphor, what a beautiful picture. Excellent.

The metaphors of card-game syncs well with the fall- the falling of deciduous leaves. Wonderful imagination. Novel idea.enjoyed it. Five stars.

Casting into the flux the torn tickets of time, ..... a very fine expression and the coinage of words put together gives life to the poem...... thank you dear poet. tony

Very amazing expression with wise humor is shared casting in ti the flux. Nature is wonderful. Breeze deals the life card. Interesting sharing done definitely....10