Wednesday, December 2, 2009

Autumn Leaves Comments

Rating: 2.8

On the lover's ground so befell
The autumn leaves from the tree
Gathered on lush grass round around
When the lonely girl from abound
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Sadiqullah Khan
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Gul naz 07 February 2010

nice symbolism..........

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masked lady 11 December 2009

Beautiful poem! So cool, hopeful, and well penned! deserves 10+++

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Deepti Agarwal 08 December 2009

Lovely words stringed together... :)

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Anjali Sinha 02 December 2009

wowwwww Sadiq Yet another story of love and beauty When she shot her glance into your eyes Just to say that alls not lost Like the autum leaves that flew away with the breeze a reassurance, that she will come back again With another spring, in brightest green Like a reddest rose, with brightest sheen -10 anjali

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Rani Turton 02 December 2009

Beautiful and evocative. Thanks, Sadiqullah.

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