Friday, August 30, 2013

Autumn Leaves Comments

Rating: 4.7

Autumn leaves begin to gently fall
As summer just fades away
And blackberries from the hedgerow
Make a feast at the end of summer ball.
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Heather Wilkins 17 October 2014

beautiful imagery of Autumn leaves

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Mike Barrett 16 December 2013

Beautiful - if you get the chance, check out my poem, Joe's Camp. It too speaks of the impact of nature's beauty. Cheers!

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Mike Barrett 16 December 2013

Beautiful - if you get the chance, check out my poem, Joe's Camp. It too speaks of the impact of nature's beauty. Cheers!

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Jack Growden 19 October 2013

Excellent poem! I also have one titled Autumn Leaves.

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Roseann Shawiak 06 October 2013

Great imagery, I feel like I'm right there with you. It's like I can see everything you describe in writing and nature. Very inspirational. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Adeline Foster 24 September 2013

Great images. Read mine -. Leave Leaves - Adeline

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Sian Sullivan 09 September 2013

Very descriptive, lovely!

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Sekharan Pookkat 08 September 2013

wonderful colors of a sun set beautifully netted with the songs of birds in the evening

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Shah Jehan Ashrafi 06 September 2013

this is nice and an ode to autumn the present season it seems...enjoyed it

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Amy De Guzman 03 September 2013

How I wish to see those leaves fall. The poem vividly describes the scene.

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Valsa George 31 August 2013

The change from green to russet, golden and red is such a lovely scene which we miss here! During Autumn the maple tree is a gorgeous sight! ! The change over from summer to autumn is beautifully captured! !

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Ramesh Rai 31 August 2013

a gentle write. lovely imgery thoughts.

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Dennis Field 30 August 2013

It reminds me of my younger days, a great write. Thank you for the memoirs.

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Dave Walker 30 August 2013

A great poem, I too like to sit out late with a cup of tea. I like to do it more in the autumn.

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Heather Wilkins 30 August 2013

your pen offers a gentle touch to the end of autumn nice imagery

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 30 August 2013

Falling leave, changing colors, sipping tea, twilight marking the end of the day all captured so beautifully in the poem. Thank you.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 30 August 2013

Sometime I feel I am reading W Keats truly speaking David beautifully u write / summer has gone (I call it season's old age) and the autumn the season of the age of infant and consequently the spring , season is young (THE YOUTH) concluding or last stanza is remarkable love you David Lord and love be with you

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Bojael F.S 30 August 2013

very nice poem, i say.

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Geetha Jayakumar 30 August 2013

Beautiful poem as usual..marks the end of the day with silence all around...I feel some quietness in this poem.. Loved reading it....Fantastic write.. Please do read my poem Happy Learning Dear! am waiting for your comments..

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Bojael F.S 30 August 2013

very nice poem, i say.

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