Saturday, June 17, 2006

Autumn Is A State Of Mind Comments

Rating: 5.0

I feel the gray rain falling in my mind.
Crying becomes a thousand leaves outlined.
My eyes are mesmerized by red sumac.
A touch of pewter shines against my back.
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Sandra Fowler
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Michael Garrett 23 August 2016

Wonderful Poem, really enjoyed it, , can't wait to read more.

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Vinod Kumar 23 December 2009

Lovely Autumn, beyond imagin expression, thanks a lot 10+

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Raj Nandy 09 June 2009

In this blasting Delhi's summer heat of 42 dgrees C, I can still feel Autumn with my mind! Truly it is a state of mind! 10+ -Raj Nandy

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Surayya Abbas 02 June 2009

An excellent piece.lovely style.

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Bob Blackwell 14 March 2009

Sandra, I suppose Autumn can be a state of mind, leaves fall, tears fall, but in life there is winter warmth, as well as winter cold. I love your writing Bob

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Mamta Agarwal 27 December 2008

Sandra, in the title itself you have said everything. though the poem begins on a melancholic note, somehow in the last lines, your memories dispel the clouds. seasons of the mind governed by seasons of the heart. lovely. you always express your thoughts so beautifully, using unusual images.10 Mamta

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Bill Grace 30 September 2007

Just wonderful. Bill Grace

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Muhammad Hesham 08 September 2007

This intimate relationship with elements of nature, which sometimes amounts to complete unity, is amazing. The imagery is as vivid and surprising as the experiences depicted.

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Alison Cassidy 14 May 2007

Sandra, this is such a melancholy piece - filled with and sombre grays and tears. Once again, you use your unique rapport with the natural world to effectively capture mood and show the reader your Autumn state of mind. A wonderful poem. love, Allie xxxx

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Jim Foulk 10 February 2007

very well writen, nicely said, and very beautiful piece of poetry.

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Betty Louise Keck 23 January 2007

Sandra, I love this poem! Your imagery is superb. Autumn is my favorite time of the year, , , although we don't really have an autumn in part of the world I live in now, but the memories of the colors and feelings of autumn always stay within my being. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem. - Betty

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Yvonne Rautenbach 23 January 2007

another precious picture in words

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Jim Foulk 21 January 2007

i love this poem, the way you word it. is so real, keep on writing these lovely pieces of poetry.

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Melvina Germain 28 November 2006

Another excellent poem Sandra, the imagry is fabulous, I agree with Jolanta, very picturesque. Thankyou Sandra--Melvina--

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Jolanta Gradowicz 19 October 2006

I love the poem the way I love colorful autumns... It's very picturesque.

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Robert Howard 30 July 2006

Fine companion piece to your previous poem, Autumn Bound.

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Brian Chang 08 July 2006

I love your poems.

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Patrick Ladbrooke 29 June 2006

The autumn smells of apples in my hair. This is an enduring reminder of autumn. The poem captures it with great colour. Patrick

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Preeti - is here! 26 June 2006

Indeed a pleasure to read this fine piece. Preets

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Will Barber 24 June 2006

The blending of colour, odor, sound, message and mood - synesthesia, a term I had forgotten until I read this. A characteristic of all your work, I now reflect. This is very beautiful.

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