Saturday, November 24, 2007

! Autumn In The Northerm Hemisphere, Spring In The South.. Comments

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It’s autumn here: the leaves fall brown,
the nights are cold and frosty,
the days are shorter and shorter,
there’s snow on the way…
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Michael Shepherd
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Alison Cassidy 29 November 2007

Clever, original, uncomplicated, mystical - I'd recognize your work anywhere. Your words make me smile with damp eyes. love, Allie xxxx

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Duncan Wyllie 24 November 2007

There is a lot of quality for us to draw on here Michael, Thankyou Love duncan x

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M, you have removed my 'bah humbug' feeling about what happens after autumn. I could read you all day. t xxx

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Tom J. Mariani 24 November 2007

Acceptance of 'When the shorter days/Close in' as I end my poem 'October.' Another view, closer to your poem here is 'Beyond October.' Sometimes autumn, through no fault of it's own, does cause sadness. However, as you say 'fill up your lungs with air' and you will feel 'everything that nature needs.' Thank you. Tom

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