Monday, October 6, 2008

Autumn In Russia. Comments

Rating: 4.5

The wood seems to be tired.
Preparation of all alive to the lingering somnambulist.
Disturbing feelings of forthcoming separation, loss.
The last elaborate trees apparel in yellow-orange-purple colors.
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Ashraful Musaddeq 10 October 2008

A moving composition with Russian autumn. Enjoyed this poem with amazing metaphors,10 for it.

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 10 October 2008

Poem of high imagery..very deep

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Onelia Avelar 06 October 2008

Good deep poem, everything seems to be deeper in Russia :) the forest, the winter, even the poets are deep in thought :) I imagine the Winter Landscape with a Bird Trap by Pieter Bruegel and I was sure there will be the birch in your poem :) . I like the romantic image of November. Best regards, Onelia

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Ramesh T A 06 October 2008

Truth of Nature is well stripped off in verses pure white as winter in Russia! Nice depiction of coming cold season!

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