Wednesday, October 2, 2019

Autumn In Heaven Comments

Rating: 5.0

Autumn uplifts her golden samovar
spilling amber across the maple trees.
Her hair flutters like flaming cinnabar
or soft skeins of silk in the morning breeze.
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Linda Marie Van Tassell
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Mahtab Bangalee 22 February 2020

Thunderstruck am I on thoughts of levin. Heaven on earth is autumn in heaven. /// beautiful autumnal sonnet; lovingly penned; congrats for being selected this poem as POD

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Kim Barney 21 February 2020

Sandra Feldman said it best. All I can add is " Congratulations" !

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Savita Tyagi 21 February 2020

Such a beautiful imagery for colors of heaven. Nothing matches the heaven brought to earth by Autumn's splendor.

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Jankovic Zoran 21 February 2020

You don't see my applause. I see in your poem Virgin letters, spring of poetry in poem about the sublime feeling. You played the words like spilling pearls and and you don't regret it. I bow down for poet's soul. P.S. Read again what Sandra Feldman wrote about your poem and believe: " Sandra is a real judge who never act."

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 21 February 2020

Linda Marie Van Tassell, I love the words that you chose. You are indeed a great writer. I am particularly touched (profoundly) by your life story. I am quoting you: " I appreciate the most important thing of all in life, that one thing which is easily overlooked in today's society - love. I live my life to love and be loved. All else falls to the wayside." , wrote Linda Marie Van Tassell. Merci beaucoup! Hebert Logerie 2/21/2020

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Jayatissa K Liyanage 21 February 2020

Superbly crafted beautiful imagery indeed. Congrats on your well deserved positioning. Thanks for sharing. x

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Dr Antony Theodore 21 February 2020

prayer boats are made of fallen leaves on a lake of tears that falls from her eye. Thunderstruck am I on thoughts of levin. Heaven on earth is autumn in heaven. What a sweet poem full of hope and joy. tony

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Ruta Mohapatra 21 February 2020

Beautiful, both the poem and the picture, Linda! Congratulations on poem of day!

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Ruta Mohapatra 21 February 2020

Beautiful, both the poem and the picture! Congratulations on poem of day!

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 February 2020

A virgin queen! ! Romance of Autumn; Fragrance of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Anil Kumar Panda 21 February 2020

A beautiful sonnet on autumn. Like to read again and again. Cleverly worded to make it an interesting reading. Congrats on being selected as POD.

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Harley White 21 February 2020

This is a really gorgeous sonnet... excellent in craftsmanship... with a lyrical flow and rich imagery... a pleasure to read and discover...

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Bharati Nayak 21 February 2020

An amazingly beautiful poem on Autumn that gives a heavenly feeling.Congratulations for this Poem of the Day!

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Excellent writing Linda Marie. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem. Mario Odekerken

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Shaun Cronick 21 February 2020

A beautiful sonnet that warms any heart and uplifts the spirit of any soul, lucky enough to read this captivating poem. Richly deserving the accolade of poem of the day. Thank you for writing and sharing this for each and all. And may God Bless and Keep you and the loved ones around you.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 21 February 2020

A heartwarming poem of the day. Congrats on your featured piece, dear Ma’am Linda Marie......10++❤️

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Sankhajit Bhattacharjee 02 October 2019

A mind blowing sonnet on autumn......10+

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Sandra Feldman 02 October 2019

Among the very many poems on Autumn, this work is outstanding thanks to its beautiful and original imagery and by being written so tastefully and brilliantly. A truly heavenly piece, every line an amazing and descriptive marvel, " Her eyes are green lanterns of willow green''' just as a one wonderful example. The whole poem is like that, one beautiful description after another. Truly and incredibly wonderful! Will keep it close in my treasure chest to enjoy many times.

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Linda Marie Van Tassell

Linda Marie Van Tassell

Lynchburg, Virginia
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