Yellow flower, grieving flower, pale flower,
You were burnt by the sun and the hot rain.
Ripe flower, matured flower, immaculate flower,
You've nevertheless kept your phenomenal beauty sane.
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You're words are magic stokes of love upon a page. What a superior talent you have. Magnificent piece!
Magnificent work. I really really understand now that how powerful one's writing can be on nature....10++
Beautiful poems..ilove it & its best season to..thx 4 nice expressions & sharing LOL
Lovely poem of nature.. your lines comes naturally too, tks for sharing
Beautiful poem! Your writing really flows effortlessly with vivid imageries that came alive by your vast imagination. Well DONE! ! ! ! 10++++++++
Merci for inviting me to read your poem. Seems that you are interested in nature as well. You may find uncountable lovely creatures in this earth. N I agree flower always draws people's attention especially those who are in love. right?
Dear Hebert I wish had a autumn in the all season here.I mean my country. In the meantime your poem is very ELOQUENT. And Culminant
dear hebert.....everything has a lifetime as this flower.we look lovingly at the flower in full bloom, but once it starts waning, weoverlook its past glory, but a poet, rejoices in all moods of the flower, and its fading out colours also impresses his mind.truely you are a nature lover, and the poem is excellent.thanks for sharing.........10++++
So beautiful, can't think of a more ammazing way to descirbe a flower, nicely written,10++
a beautifully written poem.... thank you so much for sharing.... really enjoyed reading it...
I love it... You had portrayed a simple beauty in a splendid way.. Really enjoyed it.. Thanks for sharing it.. ^-^
Merci pour votre invitation de lire votre poeme. Felicitation c est un tres beau poeme comme les fleurs qui le compose..............
i liked the way you juztaposed the colors...what's that particular flower, may i know?
tats really nice.... memorable poem.... keep writing!
Beautiful Sire, I can see autumn Fascinating translation Thank you for sharing, Rose