Tuesday, March 4, 2008

Autumn Flower Comments

Rating: 4.7

Yellow flower, grieving flower, pale flower,
You were burnt by the sun and the hot rain.
Ripe flower, matured flower, immaculate flower,
You've nevertheless kept your phenomenal beauty sane.
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COMMENTS
Rosalinda Martinez 20 August 2010

Beautiful Sire, I can see autumn Fascinating translation Thank you for sharing, Rose

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Linda Batchelder 14 October 2009

You're words are magic stokes of love upon a page. What a superior talent you have. Magnificent piece!

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Munia Khan 05 October 2009

Magnificent work. I really really understand now that how powerful one's writing can be on nature....10++

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 02 October 2009

very poetic! ........................

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Aboda Awed 30 September 2009

Beautiful poems..ilove it & its best season to..thx 4 nice expressions & sharing LOL

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Niken Kusuma Wardani 29 September 2009

Lovely poem of nature.. your lines comes naturally too, tks for sharing

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Rayan Ali 28 September 2009

a very beautifull poem....

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Mimi Fakhira 28 September 2009

Beautiful poem! Your writing really flows effortlessly with vivid imageries that came alive by your vast imagination. Well DONE! ! ! ! 10++++++++

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Laila Layla 28 September 2009

Merci for inviting me to read your poem. Seems that you are interested in nature as well. You may find uncountable lovely creatures in this earth. N I agree flower always draws people's attention especially those who are in love. right?

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Ramin Chaman 27 September 2009

Dear Hebert I wish had a autumn in the all season here.I mean my country. In the meantime your poem is very ELOQUENT. And Culminant

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Ritty Patnaik 27 September 2009

dear hebert.....everything has a lifetime as this flower.we look lovingly at the flower in full bloom, but once it starts waning, weoverlook its past glory, but a poet, rejoices in all moods of the flower, and its fading out colours also impresses his mind.truely you are a nature lover, and the poem is excellent.thanks for sharing.........10++++

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Dana Amer 27 September 2009

So beautiful, can't think of a more ammazing way to descirbe a flower, nicely written,10++

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there is a poet in me! 26 September 2009

a beautifully written poem.... thank you so much for sharing.... really enjoyed reading it...

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Adeiza A. 25 September 2009

Hearts and feelings...great use of expressions there.

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Lily Law 25 September 2009

I love it... You had portrayed a simple beauty in a splendid way.. Really enjoyed it.. Thanks for sharing it.. ^-^

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Milica Franchi De Luri 25 September 2009

Merci pour votre invitation de lire votre poeme. Felicitation c est un tres beau poeme comme les fleurs qui le compose..............

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Indira Babbellapati 24 September 2009

i liked the way you juztaposed the colors...what's that particular flower, may i know?

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Allan O 22 September 2009

very well done, thank you for sharing this with us all...+++

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Not A Dream Choice 21 September 2009

nice i will remember this one............

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Lakshmi Venkataraman 21 September 2009

tats really nice.... memorable poem.... keep writing!

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