Saturday, September 2, 2006

Autumn Evening Comments

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The daytime was drifting over
As the sun began to sink
Like a phoenix in it's flamming nest
The oystercatchers pipping
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Marilyn Shepperson
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Asma Bahrainwala 04 October 2006

a visual treat! nice poem.. regards... asma...

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Prasanna Kumari 02 October 2006

you made the autumn evening dance before us in different hues and the soft and sweet sounds and movements in nature.nice poem

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Jolanta Gradowicz 03 September 2006

I wish I were there... But thanks to your poem I can imagine all the beauty of the autumn evening. Warm wishes.

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S Imam 02 September 2006

Having lived quite close to the sea at one time I much enjoyed reading your poem Autumn Evening. I think that it captured some of the joy which one can experience when observing various aspects of Nature.

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Marilyn Shepperson

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Hounslow. Middx
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