Saturday, March 31, 2007

Autumn Days Comments

Rating: 4.1

A ll the squirrels collect their nuts
U mbrellas come out and the rain comes down
T he animals all hibernate for the winter
U nder the trees the leaves dropp like snow on top of us
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Khairul Ahsan 25 August 2013

A nice description of Autumn. Liked your observation of the squirrels.

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Archie Langford 01 April 2007

nice work Daniel It`s the Welsh in you it will out. best wishes a l

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Scarlett Treat 31 March 2007

Daniel, this poem is great. It is clear, concise, well organized and VERY well thought out and presented. I see the makings of a super poet in you so keep the writing coming.

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