Sunday, October 28, 2018

Autumn Days Comments

Rating: 5.0

September broke her summer leg.
now it Falls on cool October
her foliage cowed in subtle shades
bejeweling leafs in a circus of colours
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Kevin Patrick
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Bernard F. Asuncion 28 October 2018

Kevin, such a well written poem............

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 October 2018

Cool October has fallen with the fall of Autumn. You have beautifully observed autumn days and perceived the nice imagery. Heading towards autumn years definitely gives us nice feeling. An interesting poem is beautifully penned with excellent narration...10

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Dave Walker 28 October 2018

There is leaves everywhere where I live, but your poem makes them more acceptable. A great poem.

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