Autumn Comes Running Comments

I enjoyed this piece as much as I enjoy our beautiful Autumn.

Fay, you got this one dead right. I love atmosphere in a poem, and this had an abundance.10/10 Ian

Did we have a summer Fay..? must have took a nap and missed that, winter into Autumn and back again at least it feels that way, loverly poem fay.. Andrew 10

Autumn is my favourite season, and as I was reading your poem, I could hear the leaves blowing around outside, it added to the atmosphere, well penned 10 Lynda xx

Lovely tribute to Autumn and great way to usher in the new season.

This is a lovely poem expressing the beginning of autumn.A 10.

A beautiful poem with the nice ending. Love it.

An interesting rhyme scheme coupled with sensory linguistics. A magnificent trubute to a beautiful season. Well done, Fay! S :)

like a painting of a beautiful garden of eternity........the ingredients are all there!

LOvely description of Autumn, all those lovely colours. I believe the swallows have already left to visit me down south. 10/10

Autumn best spent in the Lakes, lovely piece Fay regards tom

Feels like Fall, Easy to read, flows and very nice description....10

Hi Fay. another good one and my favourite time of year. well done regards Dave T.

A very descriptive piece of writting! Keep up the good work! Aiden Howarth