Friday, November 11, 2016

Autumn Comes Comments

Rating: 5.0

the summer heat has gone
rebuked by autumn's dawn

and copper colored leaves
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Barry Middleton
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Annette Aitken 13 November 2016

Ah the circle of life and seasons to...another lovely write accompanied with a beutiful picture.... Annette

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Barry Middleton 13 November 2016

Thank you Annette, I appreciate your encouragement.

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B.m. Biswas 11 November 2016

a beautiful narration close to a lyric in its effect and soothing sound...with its overloaded natural images...... a spontaneous and fitting rhymes...... Poemhunter if just to enlist KEATS' Ode to Autumn to the related poems.

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Barry Middleton 12 November 2016

Thank you very much for reading and commenting. Glad you liked it.

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Nosheen Irfan 11 November 2016

Beautifully depicted. Autumn is a very lovely season though leaves fall. A beautiful write.10

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Barry Middleton 11 November 2016

Thanks Nosheen. I love all the seasons except winter. Autumn is a pensive time.

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