Alice Kriel

Alice Kriel

Douglas, South Africa; Currently in UK
Saturday, February 18, 2006

Autumn Affection Comments

Rating: 5.0

The beauty of slow decay
and the fragrance of dust-coated roses
Brittle leaves falling to the ground
leave the slumbering tree starkly bare
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Alice Kriel
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A. Michael Sears 26 February 2006

WOW...not sure what else to say. The message is beautifully carried through an ABCD-ABCD rhyme scheme that works wonderfully. I love it.

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Gina Onyemaechi 21 February 2006

The images, the sensuous wording, the impeccable rhyme symmetry - a fabulous piece of writing. From 'honoured to be reading you' Gina.

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Alice Kriel

Alice Kriel

Douglas, South Africa; Currently in UK
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