Monday, August 27, 2007

Autumn (A Theme) Comments

Rating: 5.0

...In the schematics of the theme
Unaltered vibrant rays
...Cast their gilded luminescence
Upon late September Days
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Theodora (Theo) Onken
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Lawrence and Herbert said it all... this is wonderfully atmospheric and erudite, so very stylishly penned. t x

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Theodora Onken 27 August 2007

Thank you dear one! I really wanted you to read it, last night...and tried to get your attention, but you were on your own flow, and i do understand that! When your going, you do not want to stop the thought progression. Feeling very nostalgic today, as Curtis was at Pike Place Market, in Seattle...And My ex uncle has a Park named after him there! The epsodes today were amazing and filled to the brim with yummy food...views of the Market, i grew up knowing, and the last shot, Of Holly, on her deck, with Victors design: The Space Needle in the background. Thank you so much for your praise. Always, Theo

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 27 August 2007

Herbert would have to use 'ambience' because that's exactly my sentiments of this wonderful poem you have written, Ms Theo! I am not going to admit I'm jealous that I could not have come up with such a remarkable 'vision'. It's Norman Rockwellish; a Currier and Ives ('am I aying that correctly? ') ...those dudes. I see these words etched on a greeting card. This is some nice stuff! And you know Herbert isn't easy to impress. LOL

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Theodora Onken 27 August 2007

Thank you so very much Herbert. So glad you liked! Always, T

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Herbert Nehrlich1 27 August 2007

Excellent ambience poem, Theo. Enjoyed it. Best H

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