Saturday, October 18, 2008

Autumn Comments

Rating: 5.0

Autumn comes.
As one door closes,
One door opens to another time,
A crystal time of monoshades,
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Fred Babbin
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Ena N. Mori 26 March 2010

I enjoyed reading your poems, Fred. I like Autumn the most,

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Crazy Vampire 25 March 2010

really food poem, totally captures autumn. good job =]

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Eyan Desir 22 December 2009

This poem is warm well express good job

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Bob Blackwell 03 May 2009

I read this poem first as it is Autumn where I live. Its a lovely time of year, you are right 'one door opens to another time'. It is also the time we should reap the fruit of our labours and store them up for winter time. We don't do that anymore, we just eat until we have had our fill, and then wonder why everything falls down.

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Fred Babbin

Fred Babbin

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