Friday, September 26, 2008

Autumn Comments

Rating: 5.0

I went back to our avenue of autumn gold today
to see if you would always be there as you'd said.
Yet found that even there, our most treasured of places,
was quiet, still and empty of one other living soul.
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Neil Graham Marsden
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Vanish Windows 15 October 2008

A lovely sensitive poem, Neil. I am left with a sad autumnal feeling along with a picture of the golden colours of autumn.

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Shimon Weinroth 09 October 2008

well constructed in the venue of free verse, Walt Whitman is as melodious as rhyming 10

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Original Unknown Girl 09 October 2008

Very sad poem. The longing and missing is palpable in this piece. Though I do believe that we can hold our loved ones in our heart. I hope I've not misread this poem, it is lovely. HG: -) xx

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