Thursday, March 20, 2008

Autumn Comments

Rating: 4.0

I stroll the street my thoughts ride the air with every breath
Wind swirls to scrape my cheek reminding me to be vigilant of its looming bite
A young woman clutches hand to chest keeping the chill from becoming too familiar
Trees sway littering the air with their infinite supply of photosynthetic messages as
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C. P. Sharma 11 March 2010

I enjoyed it. I love autumn, its golden hue and fruity juice. CP

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Indira Renganathan 02 May 2009

Wonderful flow of words...impressive10

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Sally Plumb 07 April 2009

This piece reminds of walks in the park, and squirrels. Its lovely.

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 03 April 2009

Congratulations- love the play of words...smooth and moving with the season....I love Autun too and enjoying it now in South Africa - Cindy

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Myrtle Thomas 31 March 2009

A very lovely poem as the Autumn of the year is so beautifully colorful. I found this a much enjoyed read and I'm going to read more of your works I found them so lovely.a 10

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