Monday, October 2, 2023

Autumn Comments

Rating: 4.9

The prevailing wind teases
And circles the trees
The multicolor leaves
Fall ever so gently and sway
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 12 January 2024

To my favourite with top marks

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 12 January 2024

Dear friend Rose, this poem is delight both to the eyes to visualise and to the heart. Loved the colourful leaves.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 12 January 2024

A fascinating account of the leaves in varied colours - brown, red, yellow, orange, purple, fluttering like butterflies in the breeze.

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Aufie Zophy 06 January 2024

Very well written; the reader sees the beauty in his mind while reading these verses.

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Cowboy Ron Williams 11 November 2023

Excellent poem. Thanks for posting.

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Bri Edwards 08 November 2023

I give **** four stars. The leaves also clutter up our long, sloped, winding driveway to the highway as well, but they ARE nice to look at. : ) bri

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Anjandev Roy 31 October 2023

Love to read it time and again.....

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Indira Renganathan 18 October 2023

Natures nice combination of colours is interestingly written...liked

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Rebecca Navarre 03 October 2023

You have captured so beautifully the magnificent feeling of autumn! .. Endless 10'S And Endless Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 03 October 2023

Oh, So Wonderful painted like a beautifully sweet dream! .. Awesome! ..

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 02 October 2023

Wonderful description of a beloved season TFS Rose-marie

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Anjandev Roy 02 October 2023

Like low flying butterflies...... wonderful write....thank u so much.

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Nabakishore Dash 02 October 2023

Excellently written Autumn picture Mam.

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 02 October 2023

Autumn nicely put. Good allegory

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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