Friday, September 13, 2013

Autumn Comments

Rating: 3.8

Branches gently sway
As autumn leaves glide softly to the ground
Leaves red, yellow, gold and brown
Tiny grey squirrels all around
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Ken E Hall 16 February 2015

The poem makes my skin feel the poem so delightful indeed Autumn that magic season...regards

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Brave Hearts 01 February 2015

Terrific work! I like the autumn, too. You will get my Re: soonest possible. You should know by now that you are a great poet, Forrester!

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Brave Hearts 01 February 2015

I like the autumn, too. Terrific work!

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V P Mahur 24 March 2014

Dear Mary, This is a nice description of autumn. Liked it. Thanks! ......................... 'Love Heaven' ..........................

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Noreen Carden 18 November 2013

Hello Mary a lovely description of Autumn well done

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John Brown 14 November 2013

Pretty poem Mary, but roll on spring I say.

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Khairul Ahsan 01 November 2013

Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem. You have drawn a beautiful imagery of Autumn here. 'Tiny grey squirrels all around Leaves rustle as they scurry In a quest to find some food' Squirrels also hide their food under the fallen leaves.

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Yasmin Khan 15 October 2013

A beautiful poem with vivid imagery in the tradition of romanticists. The subject is my favorite.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 22 September 2013

beautiful paintings about autumn lovely thank

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Heather Wilkins 20 September 2013

a beautiful poem about Autumn Nice imagery.

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Valerie Dohren 20 September 2013

Lovely - and Autumn is upon us now. A fine poem.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 13 September 2013

Drawn a beautiful picture of autumn, Mary. Here too the season is in the air.

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Gajanan Mishra 13 September 2013

dance upon a bed of leaves, good write, thanks.

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