Autumn Comments

You wrote this poem a long time ago, but that is irrelevant because poems about the seasons are always N-O-W, in the moment. Your stanzas are a procession of essentials of the season: 1 - the centrality of the color orange, 2 - sunshine giving way to cold winds,3 - birds flocking preparatory to flight,4 - fiery fallen leaves outside/ fiery flames inside. Final Impression: this is the season which is often elusive, hides in winds of early winter, then reappears briefly as an Indian summer, and is now preserved and archived in Barb's poem.

Got me with: For the flyers a have... breeze. Rhythm is perfect here. Season poems are always a good write.

Dear Barb A picturesque description of Autumn. nice lines. Thanks I invite you to read my poems and leave some comments.

what a poem! brilliant! liked it very much.

Autumn is probably the prettiest of the seasons, calm and tranquil, like the autumn of life.

Very pretty poem. I love autumn!

A beautiful poem, like it.