Monday, August 6, 2012

Autumn Comments

Rating: 5.0

The autumn has come upon us!
Emeralds have faded.
Rubies now die.
The golden treasures of the tree
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Soren Valentine
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David Beckham 05 January 2013

aww...starts the critique. Then comes over powering emotions that this poem demands from the reader. I hope this in some way reveals the gateway to your heart. That at your core you are just as sentimental and willing sharer of his unique abilities. Thank you for this wondrous and simple poem.10/10

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