Autumn Comments

The fall teminds me pf being alone soulless though strong.. Strong enough to stand the crowd.. The loud the failure... Seeking only being me.. The reel me so what did automn do to the tree is simply showing her how it can be unbreakable without a bird or in need for a leaves.

Nothing can warm her but a leaf and bird.

Too bad we have our autumn also, when we get old. Anyway, let's just hope that the spring will warn the tree again. Beautiful poem, shows how good your heart is, thinking and wishing the tree well.

Autumn has nicely been pictured, a nice poem. keep it up.

Thank you for sharing your feeedback i really apreciate this you're also inspired and talented as poets used to be

spring is coming soon and your leaves will return and your flowers will blossom..this is the usual subsequence for a highly intelligent person like you

oh what did this poem do to me? ! ! ! wonderful