Friday, March 11, 2005

Autumn Comments

Rating: 4.5

in shushed shuffles
of weather beaten
sound,
swirling around
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Adryan Barnathan
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Amberlee Carter 25 March 2005

this is beautiful poetry...well done

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Lenchen Elf 11 March 2005

Lovely Adrienne, you've caught the muted sounds well throughout, thanks for sharing a gentle moment

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