Tuesday, November 24, 2009

Autumn Comments

Rating: 4.3

O sweet autumn leaves
Making the forest expressive
WE play along the jungle of life
In hues unfurl the tales of ours
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Catrina Heart
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Prabhata Kumar Sahoo 24 September 2017

Autumn is nicely presented in your poem.

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Rafique Farooqi 31 January 2010

you have scaped beautiful picture of autmn, falling leafs and sunsets of autmn with variety of colours is unfolding natuar's dignified styles of beauty.

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Walterrean Salley 26 December 2009

Love the autum for many reasons. And its leaves are so expressive in their varied hues. A poem well written. 10

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 11 December 2009

Each color speaks about our picture perfect Living lively on cycles in this world good mark 10 shan

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Gillena Cox 06 December 2009

lovely sentiments to the season; colours vividly expressed,

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Sally Plumb Plumb 03 December 2009

You know autumn well. I love it too.

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this is magnifique dear lady.

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Costa Anakiev 29 November 2009

Beautiful. My autumn is painted in black and brown now.

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Tsira Goge 26 November 2009

Gloom escapes from dusk to dawn Giving spirit to the fallen vegetation ....................................................... It's very fine, Catrina..10..... Tsira

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Rafique Farooqi 25 November 2009

Love and memories of love bloom in autumn, beautiful sights and sunsets are wonderful, , withering leafs of different colors, touch the delicacy of mind......a very beautiful poem

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Ency Bearis 25 November 2009

well illustrated scenery.....colorful....10

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C. P. Sharma 25 November 2009

Your colorful autumn to me reminds The fragrant spring is not far behind. CP

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Carol Gall 24 November 2009

hues unfurl lovely catrina your words are a delight 10

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Eyan Desir 24 November 2009

Oh sorry about the debate.... Well this piece was very sweet Lady Cartina you should try to publish these poems of yours.... you crawl before you walk you start small and you bulid your self up... Publish your work ok...

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Moonbee Canady 24 November 2009

So Lovely, Is This Poem and So Much of A Realism, I Could Almost Smell The Pungent Wild Scent of The Woods... I Love Nature... and The Colors and Autumn could be viewed as symbolistic of Humanity... Good Write... MoonBee

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Sinnaminsun Sinnaminsun 24 November 2009

I love the colors of autumn and you expressed the essence of it wonderfully :)

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