I scour the cottage for signs of past presence
L ike a famished orphan at the erstwhile site
O f a long-spilled rice-sack, grubbing some essence,
V estige of sustenance. Hope gutters fitfully not quite
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First off, I love that it's an acrostic.......yet it's much more complex than most tend to be. I like that. This is hauntingly beautiful Tony. Sincerely, Mary
Awesome Tony. Your very talented. So well done.