Sunday, February 28, 2010

Autum Love Comments

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The Autumn evening sky vanishes
The old, broken park bench fades away
The ever so green leaves seem to fall,
Fall one at a time
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Bette Dalia
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K. Bianca 02 July 2010

The poem beautifully captures the picture of a love that outshines everything else in life. Nicely phrased and very poetic. Is the title delibrately spelled so? Great work anyways!

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Ankita Sharma 12 March 2010

liked it gives you the feeling of smoke

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