Autum Dance Comments

I love how you described the charms of a woman while gazing from afar. Surely the poem connotes a hidden love that's better off unshouted while this poem hears the confession of such untold feelings. This has been another talent shown by filipinos, we are no wonder passionate and really hopeless romantics. U go poet! - cynthia

A lovely poem with a charming atmosphere, but I find the innocence oppressive! It expresses a point of view I rarely adopt, but that may be my problem, not yours, Gershon

I enjoyed this well-crafted poem with its unusual, musical imagery.