Monday, September 20, 2010

Autobiography #88 Comments

Rating: 3.1

The underachiever woke up on the wrong
Side of life, or so he supposed with a
Perceived unawareness and a limited view.

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John Richter 14 January 2015

'Perceived unawareness and limited view' - exactly the devils to cause such a miserable life. I think you have a very well defined perception yourself. At least in my view I see the younger generation so lacking in long term aspirations, wasting away life in fleeting moments. On the other hand, as an artist, I agree that living is indeed what it's all about. What is our work if not fleeting - mere words upon crumbling leaves. The difference I think is gusto - an inner drive to just do it. Very intuitive poem, and thoughts that I fear not truly realized by many until it is too late for a comfortable retirement.

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Kenneth Maswabi 14 January 2015

it is great.i love it.thanks.

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