Autobiography Comments

i didnt think so deep sir it may be childish over here as i am just a dirt of this section pardon

'' if you die poor, / certainly / your mistake. '' ? ? ''CERTAINLY''..? ? Why? Take one of the many and many who escaped the horror of a war, with whole towns destroyed.. let's say Syria - just as an example - They have lost everything.. Even those who had experienced a comfortable life - before the war - suddenly found themselves poor.. and not a few among them will die poor.. Why should it be their fault?

This poem should be put in prison, before any lives you have laying around. Good gracious...

a delightful write to life life king size.............I invite you to read my poems and rate them.Thank you

Mature write from a young man... poetry really calling your mind to advance its step! _Soul