Autobiography Comments

N i c e and t o u c h y...

cool one my dear you have come a long way- and u still have miles and miles to go before you. So keep head straight and chin up take gods name and DO IT WHATEVER --10 regards anjali

You have opened your heart here and although your life has been hard so far you are still young, keep positive and keep writing, 10 Lynda xx

Such a sad memories, , , Don't give up, okay, still many people love you and your poem, , , They want to read you more write, , They want to see you walk forward, , And I'm still here even just a distance, , Hehehe, , this is the lovely one! very cool! Naru Kaede, ,

Hello poet friend Min and thank you for sharing a part of your soul and life's journey. Life is filled with difficulties and trials, however, being alive, we can appreciate the fact that we are able to look upon them and learn. Great read, Loyd

Profound pain pouring through your pen Yet there is freedon at the very end. Good write!

You certainly packed a lot of feelings into these few lines. Sometimes we dream only to find that life itself is a dream. Just hope a happy dream. I hope poetry helps you find a way.

wow, i love the use of such words like ''thee, thou, and thus''i feel that though they are dusty but they also carry the genuinity of feelings without being filtered through our brutal machines''minds''

well written piece...gives impressive reading 10

Definitely an amazing read! ! You go girl! ! !

An excellent write. I am glad I fell upon your works. I will be reading many more

Chained by reality with consequences and vain Enthralled memories haunting through.................... .......................................................................... Though deadliest future beholds this limited thee wonderful imagery by the life, yet most powerful voice that enthrals all, a ingenious glow of unique genre, wellpenned,10++, thanks for sharing

that last line is fantastic....keep life in those lines and let them flow...great work

Ok Min! on the merits of my first read of your work, I'd say this is a good start, I enjoyed it and thyme scheme seems to flow well. Keep on writing, the only query I have is that your bio states female? the second line is a beauty too, deadliest futures are us! smiling at you, TAi

thought provoking......well done

Wonderfully weaved words of inner most thoughts which are yours alone and not necessarily for the 'real' world out there - you made me think very deep thoughts :)

cognitive thoughts...well written and expressed..10 Ency Bearis

an introspection of an honest soul........showing the ups and downs of life; wavering thoughts; undeciding mind...very dddeeep and profound.........10

The freedom of thought consumed with the beauty of your powerful mind, reflects your trueself.Lovely piece Min Sia.