The auto-sacrifice of B'ak T'ul
is no one's tragedy except the wives
of those he had consumed like morning gruel
to triumph over. Rivals, but with knives
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This is so well done. You handle rhyme so much better than most poets. It never seems to dominate your poem and your images are intriguing. Raynette
I can only agree with Raynette here. Your poetry is a very good argument in defence of rhyme! Hugs Anna xxx