Thursday, September 14, 2006

Auto-Sacrifice Comments

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The auto-sacrifice of B'ak T'ul
is no one's tragedy except the wives
of those he had consumed like morning gruel
to triumph over. Rivals, but with knives
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Linda Hepner
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Anna Russell 20 September 2006

I can only agree with Raynette here. Your poetry is a very good argument in defence of rhyme! Hugs Anna xxx

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Raynette Eitel 14 September 2006

This is so well done. You handle rhyme so much better than most poets. It never seems to dominate your poem and your images are intriguing. Raynette

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