Tuesday, August 25, 2009

Autistic Smile Comments

Rating: 4.6

Smile...smile...where to smile...
through ears...no...nose...
mouth is...for...sounds...
eyes can...hear...noise
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Mubeen Sadhika
COMMENTS
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 23 October 2009

Great perception! We’re far from our inner spontaneity. All are after thought. Ten+ ++ Ms. Nivedita Thanks for comments Cordially invite to read and comment on Enigmatic Navel Lie Sly or other poems. niv

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Cecilia Real 20 October 2009

very expressive of how others may actually feel when asked to smile. For some, smiling is just a reflex and the heart does not agree with it. The poem expresses that distinction by saying that a true smile should be felt from the heart. Thumbs up!

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Dragon Wizard 16 October 2009

Deep and felt, beautifully expressed. Great poem, my friend! Greetings, Dragon Wizard

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Clara Odelia Ciutara 17 September 2009

Very, very nice, you've described the whole autistic smile, , , ,10

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Alex Searle 17 September 2009

Very good. A whole world of emotions that fails to be emoted! I like the stop-start style, accurate in it's representation of the autistic world we couldn't begin to fathom. Great stuff keep it up!

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Anand Madhukar 17 September 2009

Your style is different to my own and that is perhaps why it is such a pleasure to read your creations. A wonderful poem yet again.

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Ency Bearis 12 September 2009

nice poem with good descriptive write.......10

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Mystic Indian 03 September 2009

a churning of emotions, a brilliant portrait of word pictures.10/ 10 and my vote!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2009

Touched...not...to be touched... ate spice...feeling...the tongue... cried...knowing...the agony moved...rocked...sensed...senseless.... it is really wonderful piece of writing on autistic smile all behavior abnormal.. oh fanstastic writing....10 read mine yes to to... what do i seek

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Kafil Uddin Raihan 30 August 2009

Touched...not...to be touched... ate spice...feeling...the tongue... cried...knowing...the agony moved...rocked...sensed...senseless ............very interesting..........

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Miriam Maia Padua 27 August 2009

you have a very unique thoughts you see things in a different way.... Autistic smile...you made it so impressive.. autistic smile..their smile is the most innocent smile anyone can give honest and sincere... thanks for making this... really great... 10++ Lovelots, Maia

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Catrina Heart 26 August 2009

nice and lovely poem to read.........Thanks!

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Shalini Sundararamalingam 25 August 2009

i feel that poem can be phrased in a better way, anyways content of the poem and topic was different and good..

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Ted M 25 August 2009

You really understand the subject before you write about something. The unfortunate ones, in their own different world. a sudden reaction, caught unware, but they are gifted in some special way. They have some amazing talent. A kid I know can recollect any date of birth you tell him, and even the day it will fall on the next year.

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Mary Sanchez 25 August 2009

That really is a perfect reproduction of the structural features of an autistic individual. Very nice!

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Zeinab Sherif 25 August 2009

very nice & lovely 2 read.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 25 August 2009

you have a nice poem here!

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 25 August 2009

They say smile is a replica of your sincerity and honesty.So don't stop smiling! ! !

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Sarwar Chowdhury 25 August 2009

perfect Autistic! ! This type of picturesqes are bearing reality of concerned! I got into the fact dear! Because of........ we see, hair smile, eyes talk, body hear etc... the style of expressions i liked much! You know, i love to construct this way and i see this format gives me amazing flow! 10101010101010

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Patrick A. Martin 25 August 2009

Uniquely Mubeen and very clever I think the xperiment woks Buddy. Oh by the way I voted this a 10

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