James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
Monday, June 1, 2009

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Rating: 3.5

Is it poetry,
are you even more confused,
in it.It is sinful it knows it, Yet so,
Wicked is it in you, it always is, you glow in it..
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P.S....Just so you know...2-Night was TYPE-O NIGHT at the stadium(good one FjR) ....Anyone who got read & critiqued by me was a recipient of a sincere, but grammarically flawed comment...Which would strongly suggest i lie down now, & fall asl.........zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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IT appearsa to be a cross between a paradigm & paradox.....And perhaps a dlocksom of prismic spectrum, to be fair to IT..., within and aboung IT.. Yet your locution, shows sumo loquatiosness, as in prosaic infarction...Still in the end, IT survives the dead-falls of ''THE EDGE''...and instead i find this diamond of art 2-B of primo bella poetico....IT is...IT has been...and IT shall forever remain POETRY! f

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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