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really good -one writes what and how they want people are people cant make everyone happy

An excellent write Alf. You have composed with nice imageries. It is thoughts provoking also. 10+++

Paper is canvas, soft and serene, Snow white flesh…uniquely clean; Untouched it waits whilst I prepare, With eyes transfixed in poet’s stare; wow what a beauty Alf fantastic piece you penned there and on a just so topic that no one does with such seriousness and abandon great...thanx cheers

Good thinking. I appreciate the thoughts, being a rhymer myself.

Found this piece of personal interest, as despite some innocent flack i am sometimes a recipient of in this claim, but: ...I am not a Poet, nor is my work guided by pure poetic principle. I am a story-teller, probably more valued at a party, or my frequent motivational seminars on sales & marketing, than i will ever be a sumo-credible master of the Written Word....Yet, i enjoy the challenge...and enjoyed this read! WellDone, Alf! F j R 2009

A very good rhyming story. You write in rhyme so well....you have a gift.

brilliant piece sir. absolutely..

Your poems give us life...keep writing in whatever guise you wish.. Your.thoughts flow evenly and lightly but you are in control.Fortunately poems have no boundaries, it is part of ourselves when writing, becomes a part of others when reading and I admire your style

Poetry comes in many guises Alf...you show that so well here...thank you for an excellent write....10