*** Australianisation *** Comments
Sounds of gravel under heavy tires
Teasing the silence of little house in the
Bushes and surrounding of wild flowers
Open my exotic fear
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nicely captured, beauty of Australia, beauty of love. 'Fading Heart' said it well. reading your poem is like watching a movie, nice pictures.
that is a great poem your wording is like a movie i picture myself in your words that is a good effect to have on people reading your poems :)
i like it..it so full of.. emotions. It made me wonder though, i know this could be a personal question so feel free not to answer :) ... its such a strange poem..can be almost called 'foreign' coming from you, your profile says you're from singapore..yet the poem expresses belonging to an Australian culture.
I like this one. It's very touching. You should write on all types of different subjects. It expands you thoughts with different moods. I personally write on my life moments. That's why you don't see me write alot of poems, but when I do...people say they're great(= Keep up the jaw-dropping wok! ! ! ! ! !
Excellent descriptions and imagery. And it all flowed together beautifully. Wonderful piece.
ok no offensce it was a brillant poem loved it expescally for my country but in the bus we dnt have many wild flowers there mainly grown in the towns dw love ur work
Interesting! Love it is said respects no time nor space. It is nice.
Wow! Amazingly artistic, painting a sunny picture of love. Great job!
A Great Piece my friend. In this lonely Indian Night You words indeed brings me back those little sweet memories that i thought have lost without a scar left
Okay about my last comment This is definitely my favorite. You're an awesome poet. This one was just really sweet and sincere.
a classic, i must say. it reflects on the australian life... keep it up man.: D
Nice work; great representation of the Australian way of living. Keep up the good work
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7/25/2025 8:13:15 AM # 1.0.0
This is a very mature work. The vivid detail is deftly captured by your comfortable command of the art of painting with words. A delight to read. Thank you for sharing!