Saturday, December 5, 2015

Australia - The Sun Is Setting Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sun is setting in the distance of a yellow glowing day
The heat of the sunlight has been beating down as it held its sway
The dying embers of the waning disc sink below the horizon
The light dances in colours of a violet, red, yellow and brown song
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Paul Warren
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Shakil Ahmed 05 December 2015

The dying embers of the waning disc sink below the horizon The light dances in colours of a violet, red, yellow and brown song- nice flow of rhythm, beautiful work, thanks for sharing

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 December 2015

Sun is setting in the distance and this imagery is very fantastically presented here with amazing sense. Wisely drafted poem shared with reality.10

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