Wednesday, August 19, 2015

Australia – The Brown Snake Comments

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We were cadets who as part of the training went
To the Adelaide Hills in hiking and compass sent
Dropped from Echunga to find our way back
The groups of four were walking by map a fact
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Paul Warren
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 19 August 2015

Lovely narration Paul. I enjoyed i thoroughly. Thanks for sharing.

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Rajnish Manga 19 August 2015

Remarkable narrative. I must call it photogenic poetry. The reader is also following the cadets to find out a way out and in the end he is happy to touch upon the moral of the story. Entire scene is nicely recreated. Thanks, Paul.

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ADELAIDE, SOUTH AUSTRALIA
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