Saturday, August 29, 2015

Australia - Dusk In The Desert Comments

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The sun departs and the heat deceives
The darkness falls and the colour leaves
As the sun's in its final struggle to hold sway
With a purple, gold, red and dark blue display
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Paul Warren
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David Wood 29 August 2015

Dusk in the desert is nature's beauty made. Lovely poem with good imagery and rhyme. I've been across the Negev desert on a camel and dusk really is beautiful. Also in the rain when desert flowers sprang up from nowhere. Lovely.

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ADELAIDE, SOUTH AUSTRALIA
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