Saturday, March 19, 2016

Australia - Australia Has Nurtured Me In Its Bosom Comments

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I find myself now thinking about Australia
The country that nurtured me in its bosom
I wonder at its beauty during long hot summers
And remember happy times growing up free
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Paul Warren
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Douglas Scotney 20 March 2016

'Even though they might not...' Paul. Ok, so you don't use punctuation at the end of a line. But I reckon you should put a full stop after 'me' in the final line and start the next word with an L.

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ADELAIDE, SOUTH AUSTRALIA
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