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Just three simple lines Dominic. Just three simple lines that hit home. Just three simple lines that hit home deservedly and respectfully hard. A full score and deserved and thank you for writing and sharing your poem. Take care and i wish you well.
illusion of the mind bringing up in the world land if dream is day's friend
I'll be honest Dominic, it's so difficult to comment on thought provoking poems of power be they short or long. It's not a question of measured sober, noble balance. just a simple and undiluted comment of each reader's honesty when it needs to be called after reading a fine, powerful and haunting poem. Such as this.