Black snow is falling.
Silent screams drift on the wind:
Millions of ghosts.
Just three simple lines Dominic. Just three simple lines that hit home. Just three simple lines that hit home deservedly and respectfully hard. A full score and deserved and thank you for writing and sharing your poem. Take care and i wish you well.
illusion of the mind bringing up in the world land if dream is day's friend
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I'll be honest Dominic, it's so difficult to comment on thought provoking poems of power be they short or long. It's not a question of measured sober, noble balance. just a simple and undiluted comment of each reader's honesty when it needs to be called after reading a fine, powerful and haunting poem. Such as this.