Monday, November 24, 2008

Aurora Borealis Haiku Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dancing Northern Lights

glow painting the evening sky
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Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black
sky
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Irene Clark-hogg 31 July 2009

A poem of nature, a true haiku. Very nice indeed. Irene

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Chuck Audette 10 June 2009

Very cool. Thanks for the footnote, too. -chuck

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Miriam Maia Padua 20 February 2009

very nicely chosen words pictured the display of lights beautifully.. on nature's putting on show really captivating..... 10++

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Enrique Souffle 02 January 2009

Very nice. More writers should develop their talent with these short Japanese forms.

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Ocean Soul Haiku 06 December 2008

This is lovely... filled with colour and wonder and mystery...

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Linda Winchell 24 November 2008

All one needs to transport themselves to another dimension is the Holy Spirit! I find myself stepping out of my physical body a lot. Better place to be I think? But I do like the idea of touching the Northern lights or just being there to view the beauty. Ten for this one Miss Lorraine! God Bless, Linda

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Indira Babbellapati 24 November 2008

how i wish the legend becomes true!

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Fiona Davidson 24 November 2008

For me this is absolutly perfect...thank you

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