Tuesday, August 16, 2011

Aurora Comments

Rating: 3.5

I could not meet you
Too far away, we stretch
Longing for one another
But science would not
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Stefanie Fontker
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without a name Face 21 August 2011

i know i read this before and commented, but it's still good :) love this one, think it's one of my favs so far :)

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without a name Face 18 August 2011

yes! it's like one of shakespears poems.... that we're all actors. yes, i know i love a man who i cannot..... (i wrote a poem about it) because of a lot of things.... not that i know if he loves me back.... but i love him all the same.

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David Beckham 17 August 2011

Excellently conceived and expertly narrated. Good poem. tfs 10/10

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Allemagne Roßmann 16 August 2011

We are actors in a world to fake to be called a reality.This is ceteris paribus of the motto of the poem.-themes are written and said well.Reminder of Aurora Borealis and Australis.Science and science fiction combined.Well drafted once again.

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Unwritten Soul 16 August 2011

It's like aurora (your write) about two separating distance...like north pole and south pole, so far away but yet the attraction of poles always reveal a lovely night colors, Aurora! ! ! ... Northern light may walk away sooner but the will comes again later...this write is so connected with distance and beauty of words! _Unwritten Soul

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