Tuesday, August 18, 2009

Aura Comments

Rating: 5.0

Her heart glowed as I walked closer
Her clandestine eyes searched the crowd
An aura of longing surrounded the air
Until our eyes met and all voices drowned.
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Sam Yang
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Lonnie Kennedy 26 March 2010

This is my favorite poem from you ever. I love it. I wish I can write like this. This is without a doubt best poem in the world.

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g black black 07 December 2009

OMG THIS IS LIKE THE BEST POEM THAT I READ THE WHOLE DAY I LOVE IT VERY MUCH ESPECIAL WHEN YOU SAY YOU ARE MY ONLY IN LIKE THE THIRD PARAGRAPH, , THAT IS SO AWESOME PLAESEEE KEEP WRITTING THAT GOOOD WHOO +10 YOU DESERVE IT REALLY GOOD JOB, , , , , I CAN SEE THAT YOU WRITE FROM YOUR HEART I LIKE IT, , , AND THAT GIRL THAT YOU WERE TALKING ABOUT IN THE POEM WHOOO SHES LUCKY

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Carol Gall 19 August 2009

wow beautiful in words and emotion

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