I remember the fun I had with you
All the times we shared
Going to the park and eating ice-cream
And all the times you came for thanksgiving
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A very good effort Jayce. Shows the right kind of concerns and understanding. Keep reading good poetry and keep working at your own art. Don't be afraid to write the way you want to, and don't be pressured by short term fashions - they're as prevalent in the world of poetry as elsewhere. All the best.
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A very good effort Jayce. Shows the right kind of concerns and understanding. Keep reading good poetry and keep working at your own art. Don't be afraid to write the way you want to, and don't be pressured by short term fashions - they're as prevalent in the world of poetry as elsewhere. All the best.