Friday, August 7, 2009

Augustine's Lesson - Man Meets An Angel Comments

Rating: 2.8

Each day I walk down
to the the seashore,
watching the rising sun
my eyes tired, burning mirrors.
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Marton Dezso
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Very philosophical writing Marton. You have used the sea theme as a backdropp for your simple yet brilliant story on our experiences in life. It is like a fable and the depth and power of the sea works so well. I feel we are all creating our own reality by all the experiences we have in life. When we finally understand the lesson we were given to work and understand, the experience may have passed. However, we can then use it for a similar situation which can come our way again and work through it in a different way...10 Karin Anderson

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