Friday the 1st of August,2019 started with a
Little drizzle of rain but by one o'clock pm
Of that day -huge sheet of rain was falling
On everything in my sight, this
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I'm impressed as to how you made each phrase and line of your poem fit effortlessly into the beginning letters of your acrostics.10+
A very well controlled and expressive tear of a poem. You deliver bad news with strength; I am sorry for your loss. Good warning though by telling how meekly it began. Alarming!
We have such visitors....! Real cloud burst! These visitors were common in the month of July earlier ! But this time, they came in August, drowning thousands in misery! A well crafted acrostic!