Saturday, August 17, 2019

August Visitor Comments

Rating: 5.0

Friday the 1st of August,2019 started with a
Little drizzle of rain but by one o'clock pm
Of that day -huge sheet of rain was falling
On everything in my sight, this
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Valsa George 06 September 2019

We have such visitors....! Real cloud burst! These visitors were common in the month of July earlier ! But this time, they came in August, drowning thousands in misery! A well crafted acrostic!

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C F 22 August 2019

I'm impressed as to how you made each phrase and line of your poem fit effortlessly into the beginning letters of your acrostics.10+

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Julia Luber 17 August 2019

A very well controlled and expressive tear of a poem. You deliver bad news with strength; I am sorry for your loss. Good warning though by telling how meekly it began. Alarming!

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