August Tidings Comments

an august poem...provides interesting reading...

Rim jhim gire sawan…machal, manchal jaye man…. Bhige aaaj is mausam mein lage aise yeh lagan… The prismatic emotions refracted through the rain drops, flying like fairies…, you have made the mood of august in mid may Very beautiful lies full of poetic beauty… Abha

There is a lovely fragility in this poem, as if your thoughts too are wistful. Again, your language and mood are perfectly matched. Fx

I liked this one, i could feel rain drops falling in front of me, excellent description, rain always a pleasing concept for poems, well done