Thursday, July 31, 2008

August Sun Comments

Rating: 3.5

The birth of August is upon us, as the fair haired sun rises in the sky
With songs of the cicada unwinding, the sand hill Cranes sail by
The heat is hovering all around us, we feel heavy in it's grip
To break free from it's bonds, from it's clutches we must rip
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Rhonda Baker
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Edward Kofi Louis 07 June 2011

Great piece of work. Thanks for sharing it with us. E.K.L.

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Viola Grey 21 September 2008

I love that in this huge world of ours the fact that the month may bring different weather down here, but the sentiment is not lost....you can feel the temperature within this piece...great work

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Frank Cannon 06 August 2008

I mop my brow in appreciation. Hot stuff.

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silver phoenix 31 July 2008

effort is well noticed, very well written. Please check some of my work too and rate it and or comment it, Thankyou. Kilian

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Rhonda Baker

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